When Father Was In Charge





Nnedimma Okoli


 
© Copyright 2024 by Nnedimma Okoli



Photo by Kevin McCutcheon on Unsplash
Photo by Kevin McCutcheon on Unsplash

I was seven when my mother travelled from Awka, where we lived, to Abuja for a job interview. Father was to take care of us for the two days that Mother would be away. This had never happened in the past; having our father take care of us for a complete day without our mother being there to direct and order things. It had been Mother who always cooked in the house, it was she who bathed us, who made sure the house was in order. Mother was like that umpire that watches over every moment, ensuring that everyone played by the rules.

My two brothers and I were happy to be home alone with Father. We were excited. If you asked us the parent we liked better, our little minds would easily have chosen our father. We wouldn’t have thought about it twice.

We had enough reason to be happy. For one, Father had never punished us, no matter what it was we did wrong and how hard we provoked him. It was always Mother who disciplined us. Father only talked, and even at that, he always spoke softly—like a composition played on a distant piano. We behaved as we pleased around him. We could turn the whole house upside down, ride on his back all we want, and even flaunt some of Mother’s house rules. Those rules that ensured we were well behaved. We knew Father would never punish us. It was common for us to hear Father tell us to stop acting in a certain way because Mother would soon be back home.

I remember one particular day when the three of us were playing with Father and the sitting room was in a state of disarray. We heard Mother’s car horn indicating that she was back, the next words we heard were… “Arrange the house fast before your mother gets here”. That was typical of my father, and our three innocent minds loved him that way, more than we loved our mother. We always thought Mother was not kind enough for not allowing us do as we pleased.

Presently, Mother left for the interview and we had two whole days to spend with Father. Two full days! It felt like these two days would be like going to Wonderland and having to do all the fun things I’ve ever dreamed of.

So the two fun days began. That first day, I remember jumping on my parent’s very springy bed for more than an hour. I flung the bed-spread away to the floor and kept on jumping. When I was done, I told Father I wanted to leave the house to visit my friend in the neighbourhood. Mother would have asked me to wait till weekend. But Father, being who he was, obliged and dropped me off. I played the whole of that day to my fill before returning back home. It was one of the good days a seven year old could ask for.

I knew my brothers had been off to their own devices as well. I wasn’t sure how they spent that first day but when I returned to the house that evening, it was a mess. Clothes and toys were scattered everywhere. I saw crayon marks on the walls; Mother would be mad at this. The free day wasn’t enough for my brothers, I still saw them running around and do as they pleased even at night.

I did enjoy my day, but the more I stared at the state of the house, the more I became uncomfortable. When I looked at Father, he was sitting on his reading chair and staring at us like he was at a loss. He seemed to be at a loss. I waited for him to ask us to get to work, but that order didn’t come. I waited some more, but it seemed the more I waited, the more he looked to be at a loss. So I set to work, arranging the house. It was easy to do. Mother had made me do so on several occasions. As I put things in order, I saw the expression on Father’s face begin to change. I couldn’t find that lost look on his face anymore. I arranged the house, tried to clean off the crayons from the walls the best I could, then I saw myself suddenly taking the place of Mother. I just acted like her without knowing why. I made my brothers join me in the chores of getting the house in order. Father was smiling now. I saw his smile widen and I did more.

The following day was less dramatic. I didn’t jump so much on my parent’s springy bed. I jumped a little, then got down and arranged the bed sheet and pillows the best I could. I also tried to control how wild my brothers played. There should be some order in the chaos. In spite of that, we all went to bed when we wanted, not by 8:00 p.m. that Mother ruled. We also asked and got more candies than we were allowed to have.

The two days was soon over. Mother returned and we welcomed her back. I watched the face expression of my elder brother and the way he hugged her absentmindedly and knew he wasn’t happy. He had played the outdoor ball inside the house and Father never rebuked him, he had jumped on the cushions while we watched the television and no one had stopped him. All his excesses would end now that Mother was home.

I had missed Mother particularly because I realized that even though she disciplined us when we acted wrongly, she was soft in her own way. So I hugged her tight instead. I had missed hugging her. I missed how she brushed and styled my long curly hair every morning.

I took the things she brought back from her journey into the kitchen and rummaged through the bags. I knew nothing interesting would be in them. Mother never bought us candies and chocolates since she believed we got more than enough from Father. She claims she doesn’t want any of us to have problems with our teeth. Not surprising, the bags were filled with fruits and vegetables, it was why my elder brother didn’t bother to take the bags to the kitchen.

I looked at Father as he hugged Mother after we were done with our own hugs. I saw his face. I knew he was grateful that Mother was finally back. I understood his face and his thoughts at that moment. Father was glad that Mother was back. He needed her around for the role she played. I understood him too, there should be a balance in everything.

Hope they didn’t give you much trouble?” Mother asked Father.

They did not, we played most of the time,” Father answered.

Yes mummy. We played a lot, even past our bed time,” Chidi, my younger brother said.

Mother didn’t seem happy about this news, I knew this from the unhappy side eye she gave Father. I also knew she would raise the issue with him when they were alone in their room.

Mummy,” my elder brother called. “Father can cook more than you, all the food he cooked were very sweet.”

Mother was visibly surprised at this. “Really? I didn’t know you could cook that well, honey. Maybe you should cook tonight, I need to taste your food as well.”

Father laughed. “Don’t mind him please, I only cooked the best I could.”

And it was sweeter than all mummy’s food combined,” my elder brother said again. “Maybe daddy should really take over the cooking.”

Father protested again and the matter was settled faster than I thought. Mother would continue cooking for us. In all, I knew it wasn’t much of an argument. Mother loved to do her daily kitchen magic, she wouldn’t leave the cooking for someone else to do. She loved doing it.

That evening, after Mother had narrated to us how her journey and interview went, she went into the kitchen to prepare dinner. The rest of us were in the sitting room watching cartoon on the television when we heard a loud scream from Mother. In a matter of seconds, we found ourselves in the kitchen with her.

What is it honey?” Father asked, getting behind Mother as she kept staring into the kitchen cabinet. Father’s gaze were all over Mother, looking over her to make sure she was fine.

Mother looked at my elder brother instead, “You said daddy’s food was very sweet?”

Yes mummy,” he answered. “Sweeter than yours.”

What and what did he cook while I was gone?”

He cooked beans, rice and breadfruit.”

Still looking into the kitchen cabinet, Mother screamed again before turning to face Father. “Honey, the food ingredients are either finished or almost finished! You cooked three meals with all of the food condiments in my kitchen?”

Father slowly shifted away from her and only stared back.

That is food poisoning! It is not good for their health and yours as well.”

Mother left the cabinets alone and slowly sat down on the kitchen stool. She seemed exhausted, both mentally and physically. After a while of carrying her head in her palms and keeping us all in suspense, her announcement came, “There will be no dinner tonight, every one of you will have to take bitter leaf water to cleanse the toxins in your body. And if you are hungry enough to want to eat something tonight, I brought home some pineapples, bananas and pears.”

Our protests fell on deaf ears.

We were back to living with rules. Somehow, I liked living with the rules.


Nnedimma was born in Germany, grew up in Nigeria, and currently lives in Canada. Her short stories have been published in the International Human Rights Art Movement Magazine and elsewhere. Her story was chosen as one of the six finalists for the Barry Hannah Prize in fiction. She is working on her debut novel.




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