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Charles
looked at the thermometer on the garage wall,
noting it was already seventy-five degrees at 9 am. It was going to
be a scorcher today with unusually high temperatures and humidity
that could make breathing difficult. What choice did he have but to
cut the grass this early? The forecast of more rain that afternoon
prompted him to mow the lawn right away, so the grass wouldn't be too
tall in two days.
Across the street from their little
wood-frame house, my
grandparents, Charles and Marie, rented out a small two-bedroom
house. Their neighborhood had declined over the last decade, and they
were among the few fortunate people to own a home, let alone have
another to rent.
Fifteen minutes into his mowing, he spotted
a young
couple walking in the street towards him. He didn't recognize them;
they were just two of the many transients in the ever-changing area.
The
couple
walked slowly;
sweat rolled
off their faces. No surprise,
neither wore a hat
nor sunglasses, like Charles. Perspiration nearly soaked his T-shirt,
and he often wiped his brow with a red handkerchief. Their tattered
clothes and greasy, unkempt hair suggested they were homeless.
She
looked him in the eye and seemed almost apologetic for interrupting
his work. The man appeared to be about the same age and stood there
quietly, looking at the ground.
He couldn’t tell if the couple was looking
for a
specific house or just walking aimlessly. They stopped and waited for
Charles to shut off the mower. He
wiped his brow, glad
for a brief
break. Maybe they wanted directions
somewhere.
They stood about five feet apart, and Charles said hello first. My
grandfather was kind to most people, but always guarded.
The young woman responded, “Uh,
excuse
me,
sir, you got
any clothes left over
from your
garage sale here last week?
I want
me
some new pants and maybe a shirt or two.” Her language was
coarse and uneven, as if she
struggled for the
right words. She was in
her early thirties, maybe.
Charles didn’t
remember seeing them the previous week.
“Yes. I have some women's clothing here,
should
you be interested?” He gestured towards his garage. She nodded
affirmatively and mumbled, "Yassir!"
Once a month, my grandfather would place
the ‘garage
sale’ sign at the end of the driveway and leave it up for 2-3
days. They didn’t park their car in the garage during the
summer months because they left the tables up with clothing on them.
That, of course, meant that Charles set out the clothing, priced it,
and did it all over again a few weeks later.
Fifty cents here, fifty cents there. They
never made that much, for all
the work required.
Marie, who required a walker to move, spent a significant portion of
her day inside, sitting in her recliner.
Sometimes, Charles would roll
her out to the
garage in a wheelchair so she could rearrange clothes or change the
prices, etc.
It was apparent that the strangers hadn't
showered
recently, either. Charles wondered if life had always been difficult
for them. But if they could find some nicer clothes, that would be a
start. He felt sorry for them and briefly considered not charging for
any clothes they found. “Follow me to the garage,” he
told them.
Muttering something like “Okay,” the pair
shuffled behind Charles to the garage.
He
glanced
towards the house and saw Marie
looking out the window at them.
She had a scowl on
her face; she distrusted any
strangers entering
her yard, especially if she wasn’t out there to monitor them.
Charles
still couldn't say that he'd
seen these two
before, but somehow they knew there
were clothes
for sale at his house.
The
man complained about
the hot weather. He was polite,
and there was almost a gentleness
about him as he spoke. “You got
any man’s
clothes?” he asked. The man’s language was just as coarse
as the female’s.
"I believe there are some short-sleeved
shirts, gym
shorts, and work pants available." My grandparents often took
gently used clothing from relatives and friends to supply the garage
sale.
“Let’s
get out of the sun for a little while, and I have cold water in,”
Charles
said.
Charles realized the couple had never
introduced
themselves.
It wouldn’t be too long
before
he
knew
their names all too well.
He
looked back at
the house and gave Marie a
dismissive wave with
one hand. His gesture showed that he had everything under control.
Marie
glared at him,
but he
wasn't about to go inside and hear her complain
about the strangers. She’d demand
that he
wheel her outside. He needed to
wrap this up and
get back to mowing; it wasn’t getting any cooler outside. After
several minutes, the woman selected a few items and held them up
against herself to check the fit, while the male stranger found a few
that probably fit him as well.
Charles, with his simple and kind nature,
offered the
small bathroom in the back of the house for trying on outfits. He led
them out of the garage to the back door.
Standing on the top step, he grabbed the
storm door
handle and then felt something being shoved forcefully into his back.
Feeling pain and taken by surprise, he cried out, "Hey, what's
going..." but couldn't turn around as the man pinned his
shoulder up against the door frame, and Charles labored to catch his
breath.
“Shut
up,
old man!” he spoke with a
harsher, more emboldened
voice than
earlier.
“Get inside
and keep your mouth shut,” he commanded. Marie
heard the commotion from
the living room and demanded to know
what had
happened.
Refusing to give way to the sudden
aggressive actions,
Charles tried to turn around again, but the man pressed harder on his
back with a gun, and he struggled to breathe. As
he
stumbled forward through the
door, the
woman forced her way in and
stood next to him.
She pressed her gun into the side of his head and shouted, “Keep
moving, shut your mouth. Do
what you're told.”
As
they walked the short distance
to the living
room of the tiny house, Marie reacted with fear, seeing her husband
with one arm firmly pinned behind his back by the aggressive male
stranger. She yelled obscenities at the pair, and the woman ran up to
my grandmother, crouched down so her face was inches from Marie’s,
and pressed the gun teasingly against Marie’s mouth.
“You
keep your
mouth shut,
too,
woman.”
But
Marie
ignored the black woman’s
demands and
continued yelling at
both of them.
She was stubborn that way and would
let no one
tell her anything, much less shut
up!
The woman spun around and hit
Marie on the head,
but luckily, it wasn't with the gun. “Ol’ woman, I told
you to shut up!”
While Marie moaned in pain, the
young woman turned
towards Charles, got in his
face, and
shouted, “Listen, man,
tell her to keep it shut now!
I will shoot her and then you!
Don’t
bother me none at all; I done it
before.”
A broad grin stretched across
her face, showing
her uneven, discolored teeth. He nodded in understanding.
“So,
you’ll
both be real quiet then, huh?”
She patted him mockingly on the
cheek and
emitted a villainous laugh. The change in the couple’s earlier
demure behavior occurred so quickly; they now exhibited pure evil and
terror.
Charles looked at his wife with pleading
eyes and begged
her to
be quiet and do what they said.
After all,
they both had guns. The man had
pushed Charles
hard into his chair.
He winced at the force used
against him.
He feared they would never leave
the house
alive. Only after hearing the woman's voice change and seeing the
pistol did recognition strike him. He had seen their faces in the
newspaper. The police accused them of carrying out many robberies and
murders.
In the Tri-State area over the spring and
summer,
witnesses spotted a young black couple near each of the several crime
scenes. Their operating method remained consistent: they would
observe individuals and families holding garage sales or advertising
vehicles and boats for sale. They feigned interest and returned often
a week later to commit their crimes.
Stolen items included cash, clothes,
jewelry, food, and
sometimes even the victim's car.
According to the police, there was
no familial
link or common thread among the
victims. Through fingerprints
left at the scene,
the police had identified the suspects, both from out of state, and
Charles knew their names but didn’t dare to say so. So far,
only two victims from the ten crimes associated with the couple have
survived.
The
woman found a cloth belt in the bedroom and stood before Marie. She
grabbed both of Marie’s arms,
forced her
hands together, then bound the belt tightly around her wrists. “Just
in case you had thoughts of taking a swing at me, you old hag,”
she jeered.
Marie spewed more obscenities at the woman.
The woman
took a small rag and forced it into Marie’s mouth. “Ol’
woman, I told you to shut up!” She smacked Marie on the side of
the head again. "I'll shoot you right here if I have to tell you
again," she threatened, aiming her finger at Marie's eyes. At
seventy-three years old and in poor health, Marie would not put up
much of a fight.
Her eyes widened, and she
resigned herself to
her confinement; tears ran down her face.
Next, she had to tie Charles’ hands, and
she spied
the portable alarm clock plugged into the living room and ripped it
out of the outlet. The large analog numbers—12:32 p.m.—burned
themselves into his memory. Everything
happened quickly,
as if they had practiced
this routine. He questioned
whether other
victims had also observed the time of day during their assaults.
She
had found a dirty sock in the
laundry basket
and stuffed it into his
mouth, even though
he
had been quiet and submissive.
He could no
longer speak and was sure the duo would kill him and his wife of
thirty-five years after they finished ransacking and stealing.
He
couldn't move, couldn't speak, not
even touch and console
Marie.
Charles
was so angry.
What made them believe they had
the right to
barge in and seize their meager possessions?
There was very little cash on
hand, no expensive
jewelry, and no advanced electronics.
The intruders’ anger and verbal abuse were
exhausting. He had no fight left in him and never
expected to die by violent means.
Did anyone, he wondered, especially
the other
victims allegedly at the hands of this horrible couple?
They dashed through the house at a furious
pace, opening
drawers, cabinets, and closets, tossing items onto the floor. They
filled several plastic bags with various items and set the portable
black-and-white TV by the front door.
Inside Charles’s
wallet was just ten dollars,
and the man angrily
threw the wallet aside. It infuriated him that these old people
didn't own any
credit cards. He missed
the large jar full of quarters
on the closet
floor.
A pocket watch and penknife given to
Charles by his
grandfather were now in the other man’s possession. The female
criminal found
the couple’s car
keys hanging in the kitchen.
Looking out the window, she confirmed that
the sole car
belonging to my grandparents, a 1970 canary yellow Chevrolet
Biscayne, was in the driveway.
They had a nice ride to pack
their loot and
leave town!
Charles dreaded what they planned to do
next. He was
helpless as he watched them ransack their home.
She hadn’t eaten in several hours and
searched the
refrigerator, filling a bag with several things to take on the road.
Courtesy of KFC, she found a few remaining pieces of fried chicken.
She ate one chicken leg and handed another to Charles, who was hungry
as she was. He devoured it. She found a six-pack of beer that my aunt
had dropped off the day before, along with other groceries. Finding
an opener, she offered one to her partner, then took a long swallow
from her bottle. Sure tasted good, and she set the partially empty
bottle on the table; she’d take a couple more for the road. He
finished his beer in short order.
They hurriedly made two trips, each putting
their loot
in the car. The woman walked out of
the bedroom,
holding two pillowcases. Charles
and Marie would
not witness the precise instant they fired the fatal shot. He had
read in the paper about several other crimes allegedly committed by
this couple, and the murder scenes were similar and gruesome.
Marie squirmed and growled, albeit muffled,
as
the woman hovered over her, pulled the pillowcase down over her head,
and tucked it into her
shirt collar. Even through the cloth, the
woman’s breath was hideous, smelling
like gutted fish carcasses left
out in the sun,
inches away from
Marie’s
face.
She succumbed to her situation, unable to
see, move, or
hear. Charles underwent the same process. Their captors controlled
their fate, leaving their world completely shuttered. He wouldn’t
even be able to see his wife for the last time before they executed
him.
Unfortunately, the
pillowcases
were dark blue
and offered no light whatsoever. What
was the
couple doing now? These were probably the last few minutes of his and
Marie’s lives.
Charles
wished that he and Marie
had been bound
under a single sheet or cover. At least they
could look at each other and be
together.
Waiting for the sound of a
gunshot was beyond
horrifying.
But
nothing else happened
until... The man bent down close
to Charles’s
left ear and said, “We
are leaving,
old man.” His tone was
elevated, and he
snarled his words.
“You move out of this chair before we're gone,
and I will come back inside and
kill you both!”
Charles wondered if the other
victims had been
told the same thing. Did they
think they'd be
safe from harm? And
then, BANG–the
last sound?
He
sat frozen, glued to his
recliner. Was this a trick? He
wished he
could see something that
would give him
a clue. The man took the car
keys from his
partner; she didn’t drive, grabbed another beer, and walked
out. They slammed the storm door, but the front door remained open.
Charles heard the familiar sound of his
Chevy’s
engine starting, with its noisy muffler echoing. It stalled once, as
usual, then restarted with a roar and stayed running. Charles
silently chuckled at a thought: what if the killer never drove a
vehicle with a manual transmission? However, the driver threw it into
reverse,
stomped on the accelerator, and
you could hear
the gravel flying about. The tires screamed as he thrust it noisily
into first gear, then second, and sped away.
Obviously, the driver did fine driving, but Charles couldn’t tell if he turned down a side street or continued down Elm Street. Were they really gone? He heard Marie muttering underneath her pillowcase.
Charles waited
for what seemed like an eternity. They
might
have doubled back to check if Charles moved too soon. Waiting was
stressful. He had to free himself and Marie.
He couldn’t wait any longer, and after
twisting
and turning his wrists, he freed himself of the cord, pulled off his
pillowcase, and removed the sock from his mouth. Carefully, he looked
out the window
to make sure they were gone,
then untied Marie’s restraints
and removed
the rag from her mouth.
Immediately, she launched a
verbal attack on the
now-departed criminals.
He hugged his wife and exulted because they
were alive.
“The police have been looking for that couple; they killed
almost every person they robbed, but left us alive, thank God!”
Hoping they hadn’t cut the phone line, he
hurried
to the kitchen and called the police.
My grandparents repeated their
story to the
police, the FBI, reporters, my mother, her siblings, and anyone who
would listen. He ended each story by shaking his head and asking,
“Why were we left alive?” Later that same week of the
assault at my grandparents’ house, police in Western Indiana
found the couple sitting quietly in the bleachers of a park watching
a Little League baseball game. Charles’ yellow Chevy, bearing
Ohio plates, thus tipping off local police, was in the parking lot.
The ensuing trial and imprisonment of these two evil people never
revealed the answer to Charles’ question.
I only began
writing short fiction and non-fiction stories a year ago, after
retiring. Two months ago, I won second place in the Clermont County
Library Winter 2026 writing contest with The
Prayer’s Plant Farewell. My
previous writing experience includes writing grants for various
non-profits I worked for as part of my job. In 2014 and 2020, I wrote
and published two children’s books, respectively: Pitching
for Success: Character Lessons, the Joe Nuxhall Way,
and Riley’s
Winning
Catch: Good Character Prevails. My
tenure with the Joe Nuxhall Miracle League as treasurer and board
member gave me insight and knowledge to write those books.